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diff --git a/html/connect.html b/html/connect.html
index 885f52fa6d6c267887e6b94b7903726d62af5c17..1d7c154e74717cd9da30d8cd2ca2a061db66a774 100644 (file)
--- a/html/connect.html
+++ b/html/connect.html
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
        <p>
          <!-- Created: Sun Dec 13 20:25:14 GMT 1998 -->
          <!-- hhmts start -->
        <p>
          <!-- Created: Sun Dec 13 20:25:14 GMT 1998 -->
          <!-- hhmts start -->

-Last modified: Sun Sep  2 21:33:58 BST 2001
+Last modified: Sun Sep  2 22:02:36 BST 2001

 <!-- hhmts end -->
        <p>At the moment, anybody can connect inwards at any time from outside, either by ax25 or by
          telnet (assuming you have followed the instructions in <a href="install.html">installation</a>
 <!-- hhmts end -->
        <p>At the moment, anybody can connect inwards at any time from outside, either by ax25 or by
          telnet (assuming you have followed the instructions in <a href="install.html">installation</a>


@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Last modified: Sun Sep  2 21:33:58 BST 2001
     <span class=cmd>client gb7djk telnet</span>
        </pre>
 
     <span class=cmd>client gb7djk telnet</span>
        </pre>
 

-       <p>a ax25 example (connecting from GB7DJK, to GB7DXM via my local BPQ node and one X1J intermediate node):-
+       <p>An ax25 example (connecting from GB7DJK, to GB7DXM via my local BPQ node and one X1J intermediate node):-

 
        <pre>
     <span class=cmd>timeout 60</span>
 
        <pre>
     <span class=cmd>timeout 60</span>


@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Last modified: Sun Sep  2 21:33:58 BST 2001
        for the final "connect" string from the BPQ node that directly connects you to the
        cluster node itself.</p>
 
        for the final "connect" string from the BPQ node that directly connects you to the
        cluster node itself.</p>
 

-    <p>A AGW Engine example would be very similar and look like this:-</p>
+    <p>An AGW Engine example would be very similar and look like this:-</p>

 
        <pre>
     <span class=cmd>timeout 60</span>
 
        <pre>
     <span class=cmd>timeout 60</span>


@@ -167,17 +167,20 @@ Last modified: Sun Sep  2 21:33:58 BST 2001
          route that you are going to take to the destination, so this will be typically the callsign
          of your local node.</p>
 
          route that you are going to take to the destination, so this will be typically the callsign
          of your local node.</p>
 

-    <p>You will notice that the script waits until it sees the left hand string
-         of the pair and <b>only then</b> does it send the, 
-         string on the right 
-         hand side. This is called a <i>State Machine</i>.</p>
-
-       <p>A <i>state machine</i> "walks" through a conversation (in this case) looking
-         for "states" (in this case particular strings) and then performs some
-         "action" (usually some kind of connect command for the type of system
-         you are trying to navigate). When one "state" "fires" (detects the string
-         are looking for), it sends the command associated with that state and then 
-         moves onto the next "state", in our case: the next line.</p>
+    <p>You will notice that the script <span class=expect>waits</span>
+    until it sees the left hand string of the pair and <b>only
+    then</b> does it <span class=send>send</span> the string on the
+    right hand side. This is called a <i>State Machine</i>.</p>
+
+       <p>A <i>state machine</i> "walks" through a conversation (in this
+       case) looking for "<span class=expect>states</span>" (in this case
+       particular strings) and then performs some "<span
+       class=send>action</span>" (usually some kind of connect command
+       for the type of system you are trying to navigate). When one
+       "<span class=expect>state</span>" "fires"
+       (detects the string are looking for), it <span class=send>sends the command</span>
+       associated with that state and then moves onto the next "<span
+       class=expect>state</span>", in our case: the next line.</p>

 
        <p><b>PLEASE NOTE</b>: the colouration in the above example is for illustrative purposes
          only, the debug output is all one colour.</p>
 
        <p><b>PLEASE NOTE</b>: the colouration in the above example is for illustrative purposes
          only, the debug output is all one colour.</p>


@@ -241,7 +244,7 @@ Last modified: Sun Sep  2 21:33:58 BST 2001
                <p>This process is repeated for every line of <tt>chat</tt> script. 
         <br><br>
 
                <p>This process is repeated for every line of <tt>chat</tt> script. 
         <br><br>
 

-               <li><b><span=cmd>client</span></b> starts the connection, put the arguments
+               <li><b><span class=cmd>client</span></b> starts the connection, put the arguments

                you would want here if you were starting the client program
                manually. You only need this if the script has a different
                name to the callsign you are trying to connect to (i.e. you
                you would want here if you were starting the client program
                manually. You only need this if the script has a different
                name to the callsign you are trying to connect to (i.e. you